Enterprise Consulting Services/Talk

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2009-03-01 19:45:13   The page content was an exact copy of the companies main web page. The text is very wordy and so full of jargon that it is not understandable to anyone except a highly technical IT person with familiarity with ITIL. It contains terms like Value Impact Analysis and Outomation, that are not found in related form in Google searches. I would suspect that business managers would likely leave the page or click to the website, see it is the same, and avoid the firm. —BradMandell

2009-03-01 21:00:45   Brad. I removed the ad copy entirely. It's not enough to just attribute the copy to something or someone and let it remain. See this wikipedia entry on using "weasel words" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Avoid_weasel_words —EastSideStephen

2009-03-08 08:47:49   Thanks for the feedback and copy update. —stevenharkola