https://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/TalkRecent Changes of the page "Enterprise Consulting Services/Talk" on Rochester Wiki.en-us https://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talkhttps://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talk?action=diff&version1=4&version2=5&ts=12365165262009-03-08T12:48:46Zstevenharkola <div id="content" class="wikipage content"> Differences for Enterprise Consulting Services/Talk<p><strong></strong></p><table> <tr> <td> <span> Deletions are marked with - . </span> </td> <td> <span> Additions are marked with +. </span> </td> </tr> <tr> <td> Line 11: </td> <td> Line 11: </td> </tr> <tr> <td> <span>-</span> ''2009-03-08 08:47:49'' [[nbsp]] Thanks for the feedback and copy update. <span>-ECS</span> --["Users/stevenharkola"] </td> <td> <span>+</span> ''2009-03-08 08:47:49'' [[nbsp]] Thanks for the feedback and copy update. --["Users/stevenharkola"] </td> </tr> </table> </div> https://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talkhttps://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talk?action=diff&version1=3&version2=4&ts=12365164692009-03-08T12:47:49ZstevenharkolaComment added. <div id="content" class="wikipage content"> Differences for Enterprise Consulting Services/Talk<p><strong></strong></p><table> <tr> <td> <span> Deletions are marked with - . </span> </td> <td> <span> Additions are marked with +. </span> </td> </tr> <tr> <td> Line 10: </td> <td> Line 10: </td> </tr> <tr> <td> </td> <td> <span>+ ------<br> + ''2009-03-08 08:47:49'' [[nbsp]] Thanks for the feedback and copy update. -ECS --["Users/stevenharkola"]</span> </td> </tr> </table> </div> https://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talkhttps://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talk?action=diff&version1=2&version2=3&ts=12359592452009-03-02T02:00:45ZeastsidestephenComment added. <div id="content" class="wikipage content"> Differences for Enterprise Consulting Services/Talk<p><strong></strong></p><table> <tr> <td> <span> Deletions are marked with - . </span> </td> <td> <span> Additions are marked with +. </span> </td> </tr> <tr> <td> Line 8: </td> <td> Line 8: </td> </tr> <tr> <td> </td> <td> <span>+ ------<br> + ''2009-03-01 21:00:45'' [[nbsp]] Brad. I removed the ad copy entirely. It's not enough to just attribute the copy to something or someone and let it remain. See this wikipedia entry on using "weasel words" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Avoid_weasel_words --["Users/EastSideStephen"]</span> </td> </tr> </table> </div> https://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talkhttps://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talk?action=diff&version1=1&version2=2&ts=12359547132009-03-02T00:45:13ZBradMandellComment added. <div id="content" class="wikipage content"> Differences for Enterprise Consulting Services/Talk<p><strong></strong></p><table> <tr> <td> <span> Deletions are marked with - . </span> </td> <td> <span> Additions are marked with +. </span> </td> </tr> <tr> <td> Line 6: </td> <td> Line 6: </td> </tr> <tr> <td> </td> <td> <span>+ ------<br> + ''2009-03-01 19:45:13'' [[nbsp]] The page content was an exact copy of the companies main web page. The text is very wordy and so full of jargon that it is not understandable to anyone except a highly technical IT person with familiarity with ITIL. It contains terms like Value Impact Analysis and Outomation, that are not found in related form in Google searches. I would suspect that business managers would likely leave the page or click to the website, see it is the same, and avoid the firm. --["Users/BradMandell"]</span> </td> </tr> </table> </div> https://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talkhttps://rocwiki.org/Enterprise_Consulting_Services/Talk?action=diff&version1=0&version2=1&ts=12359541992009-03-02T00:36:39ZBradMandellCreate Talk page for discussion <div id="content" class="wikipage content"> Differences for Enterprise Consulting Services/Talk<p><strong></strong></p><table> <tr> <td> <span> Deletions are marked with - . </span> </td> <td> <span> Additions are marked with +. </span> </td> </tr> <tr> <td> Line 1: </td> <td> Line 1: </td> </tr> <tr> <td> </td> <td> <span>+ This page is for discussing the contents of ["Enterprise Consulting Services"].<br> + <br> + Adopting original page created as ["EnterpriseConsultingServices"]<br> + <br> + [[Comments]]</span> </td> </tr> </table> </div>