Grocery Stores/Talk

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The Grocery Stores page is linked directly from the Front Page and could be part of a first impression of RocWiki to the first time visitor. Although RocWiki features a bit of attitude, we might not want it to turn off too many visitors.

The page intro contains a lot of opinion and might benefit from a rewrite and reorganization to put the opinion into separate titled paragraph.

Thoughts anyone.

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2008-07-21 09:49:09   How's that? I don't know what to do about the "what keeps Wegmans up at night" header with Wal-Mart listed underneath. Wal-Mart doesn't even have a page, but I guess it is worth noting that you can grocery shop at some locations. Personally, I do not like going there, but I guess others might! —SaraChristine

2008-07-21 20:49:02   Well, we could always rephrase it as "Super-centers" and list Walmart and Target (the latter being a bit of a stretch, but they sell everything short of beer, spices and fresh fruits and vegetables).

Personally, I've always found that to be one of those pieces of flair that underscored our general sense of humanity. —DaveMahon

2008-07-21 21:38:26   I understand attitude, etc and not being just a Rochester Wikipedia. Since I have been actively promoting RocWiki (got a bag of handouts from PeteB at Perkins the other day), I started approaching it from the FrontPage and drilling down a bit to see how it held up for a first time browser. I have been making some quick edits on some of those drill downs. For a business owner approaching RocWiki for the first time, this entry struck me as a bit much. —BradMandell

2008-07-21 21:53:46   Well, like I said, Super Centers is always safe. —DaveMahon