The Grocery Stores page is linked directly from the Front Page and could be part of a first impression of RocWiki to the first time visitor. Although RocWiki features a bit of attitude, we might not want it to turn off too many visitors.
The page intro contains a lot of opinion and might benefit from a rewrite and reorganization to put the opinion into separate titled paragraph.
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2008-07-21 09:49:09 How's that? I don't know what to do about the "what keeps Wegmans up at night" header with Wal-Mart listed underneath. Wal-Mart doesn't even have a page, but I guess it is worth noting that you can grocery shop at some locations. Personally, I do not like going there, but I guess others might! —SaraChristine
2008-07-21 20:49:02 Well, we could always rephrase it as "Super-centers" and list Walmart and Target (the latter being a bit of a stretch, but they sell everything short of beer, spices and fresh fruits and vegetables).
2008-07-21 21:38:26 I understand attitude, etc and not being just a Rochester Wikipedia. Since I have been actively promoting RocWiki (got a bag of handouts from PeteB at Perkins the other day), I started approaching it from the FrontPage and drilling down a bit to see how it held up for a first time browser. I have been making some quick edits on some of those drill downs. For a business owner approaching RocWiki for the first time, this entry struck me as a bit much. —BradMandell
2008-07-21 21:53:46 Well, like I said, Super Centers is always safe. —DaveMahon